Cross Country
At first I was in the front and then all of the kids sped past me and then I was at the back and
that’s when I heard roar sounds and I hid behind the tree and I was so scared when I heard a
monkey sound. I thought it was some kids from the kindergarten trying to sound like a monkey
but it was a real monkey swinging above me and then I ran as fast as I could until I heard a big
sound and the ground was shaking I thought it was a car crash but it was a big black gorilla.
I ran fast past the gate and around the field and down into the back paddock and over the
objects and through the goal post. I came last but I didn't care all I cared about was having fun
my mum and dad were so proud of me for trying my best. My friend Brooklyn came first
Janaya came second and Susana came third out of the all the year five girls.
that’s when I heard roar sounds and I hid behind the tree and I was so scared when I heard a
monkey sound. I thought it was some kids from the kindergarten trying to sound like a monkey
but it was a real monkey swinging above me and then I ran as fast as I could until I heard a big
sound and the ground was shaking I thought it was a car crash but it was a big black gorilla.
I ran fast past the gate and around the field and down into the back paddock and over the
objects and through the goal post. I came last but I didn't care all I cared about was having fun
my mum and dad were so proud of me for trying my best. My friend Brooklyn came first
Janaya came second and Susana came third out of the all the year five girls.
I found it hard because I had to type my story and it took me forever.
We are learning how to recap things that we did on cross country.
Next time I would like to have more details about my story.
By Demitrious
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