About my Dad

Bang the bell rang and I sprinted home because it was  the day of my life that I would meet my own dad I wondered if I would ever see him but even though I didn't know him still ran up to him and gave him a big hug my hart was betting so fast.That same day my dad asked"were do use want to go for the day?"we all screamed out"the beach to see the sun set"that was us we were of for the day.We all got some food and that was when he told us he wont be staying for long he said"I am going back to carrot town he told us allot about were he lives".We all had a good day at the beach watching the sunset.We asked him"can you please stay for one night" he started the car and said"sorry kids I got to go back to my house".That was the best time of my life.

WALHT  write an interesting recount I am trying to add more detail.

I found it hard writing this out again.

Next time I want to remember to add more full stops.